Patrice has mentioned to me that there is a bigger meaning to my story other than the struggle to find a parking space. I agree completely yet, I am having trouble bringing it all into focus. Maybe I should think of a struggle in my life and relate it to the struggles of finding a parking space. The moral could be only the fittest survive? Or that we won't survive if we do not fight. Where in my life have a fought and made it? and how does it relate to my fight in the parking lot at Kean. Maybe that's how the segments should be broken up.
Professor Chandler had also made a valid and interesting observation: that I had not noticed myself. My writing had a tone of frustration with a hint of anger. This helped me greatly because I now know what sort of memories I have to pull from. I have to not only find a time in my life where I had to overcome a struggle but it has to be a time where I was frustrated and a little angry as well.
If anyone has any suggestions please feel free comment or e-mail me. It could help my story greatly.
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